Tales of the Great Wall
Gloria Choi, G
nce upon a time, there were four children named Gloria, Valerie, Christy and Sharon. Sharon said, “
Let’s go to the Great Wall of China for an adventure “. Christy said, “ok”. Hey, everybody, don’t
waste time! Hurry up”, said Gloria.
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After one second, they arrived at the Great Wall because traveled there by flying machine. “ This
nice place”, said Valerie. “ Oh my God! Please help me”, Sharon said. A monster called
Mitchall is eating Sharon. “ Oh no, hurry. We need to help Sharon”, said Gloria.
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The girls got a knife and stabbed Mitchall many times.
Finally, Mitchall ate Sharon. They were unhappy. “Hey! Darling, wake up! It’s time to go to school”, said
the girls’ parents. Oh! They were dreaming. Sharon is still alive.
They learned to always help people.
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